evelin.

How to fix generic AI drafts and add your own voice

AI draft feels vague and bland? Learn a simple revision process to remove generic mush, add specifics and sound like a real person.

Spot the “AI mush” in your draft

Before you improve a draft, you need to see what feels off. AI mush usually sounds smooth, but says very little. Look for long lists of vague benefits, advice that could fit any topic, and sentences full of words like “leverage”, “utilize” or “in today’s fast paced world”. If you can copy a paragraph into a different niche and it still makes sense, it is too generic. Your first pass is not editing for grammar. You are hunting for emptiness. Highlight every bland claim and ask yourself a blunt question: would my audience miss this line if I deleted it.

Common AI mush signals
💤
Says nothing new
Fits any topic with no changes
☁️
Vague language
Many buzzwords, few concrete details
📋
Endless lists
Stacked tips with no depth or proof

Replace vague claims with concrete proof

Generic AI content loves safe, fuzzy statements. To cut the mush, translate every vague claim into something you could show a friend. Swap “grow your audience fast” for numbers, time frames or a tiny case example. Turn “this is very important” into “if you skip this, here is what usually happens”. Add small, real world details, like tools you actually use or time limits that feel real. You do not need big data. One small believable detail is often enough to make a paragraph feel grounded and honest.

Vague vs concrete
Vague AI line
  • •This strategy can quickly grow your followers.
  • •It is very important to be consistent.
Concrete upgrade
  • ✓This thread format added 320 followers in 7 days.
  • ✓Post 3 times a week for 30 days, then review saves.
VS

Inject your own examples, stories and opinions

AI writes from patterns on the internet. Your power is that you have actual days, mistakes and wins. After the first draft, do a “human pass”. Ask where you can add a one line story, a small confession or a personal rule of thumb. You can keep it light. An example from last week, a client message, a mistake you keep making. Add clear opinions too, such as one tactic you avoid or a myth you strongly disagree with. These details build trust, because your readers feel a real person standing behind the words.

Quick human pass
  1. 🖍️1
    Mark dry spots
    Highlight the flattest paragraphs
  2. 📖2
    Add 1 story
    Insert a real moment or mistake
  3. 💬3
    State opinion
    Write what you truly recommend

Make the draft sound like you actually talk

Many AI drafts sound like a school essay. To fix that, read the text out loud. Mark every sentence that feels stiff or that you would never say to a friend. Shorten long chains of commas into two simple sentences. Swap formal words for simple ones you use in voice notes. If you like dry jokes or certain phrases, sprinkle them in on purpose, just a little. You can even paste a paragraph back into the AI and say “rewrite this in my voice, more casual, keep all specifics”. The goal is clear: when a friend reads it, they should hear you.

Voice check shortcuts
🗣️
Read aloud test
Anything that feels stiff gets rewritten
✂️
Cut clutter
Prefer two short sentences over one heavy one

Use a simple checklist to avoid common mistakes

A quick checklist keeps your revision tight and repeatable. Common mistakes are accepting the first AI draft, editing only commas, or deleting half the text with no clear plan. Instead, move in a small fixed order. First, cut obvious fluff. Second, add details and examples. Third, fix the voice. Stop there for now. You do not need a perfect piece, you need something clear that sounds like you and helps one reader solve one problem. With practice, this whole process can take 15 to 20 minutes per draft.

Degenericizing checklist
  1. 🧹1
    Cut fluff
    Remove empty, repeated lines
  2. 🔍2
    Add detail
    Insert numbers, tools, tiny stories
  3. 🎙️3
    Tune voice
    Match how you speak and think

Real-world examples

  • • You ask AI for a YouTube script on productivity and it returns a generic list of tips. You keep the rough structure, then add your real morning routine, the exact timer app you use and one story about a day when you ignored your own system.
  • • You generate a LinkedIn post about portfolio building. It sounds like a textbook. You rewrite the intro as if you were texting a junior colleague, add a short story about your first messy portfolio, and swap buzzwords for simple verbs like show, test and tweak.
  • • You create a newsletter draft about your first month as a creator. The AI version is polished but flat. You layer in one client quote, your honest revenue for that month, and three bullet points that describe how you actually felt.

Useful links

  • OpenAI — Learn more about how AI language models work so you can prompt smarter.

Keep learning

Related courses

More programs on evelin that fit this path. Each one adapts to you after a two minute quiz.

Guides from related courses

All courses on evelin →

Turn reading into real progress

A short quiz builds your personal learning path for How to Become an AI Content Creator. Lessons adapt to you from day one.

Start the quiz

Created with AI assistance and reviewed before publishing.